Hey guys…This is a little rant of mine, feel free to COMPLETELY ignore this. (why then do I post this? Cause it actually kind of concerns this story, no it pretty much does)
Okay so it’s come to my attention there is a HUGE unrealistic aspect to my story right now. One that’s been annoying me for a while now.
Oh come on, you can’t be that surprised. I’m sure you’ve seen it yourself! I’m talking about the four prisoners in James’ basement. You know the ones who (well it’s assumed) get fed everyday, have perfect clothes, always look clean, and aren’t in a constant half-dead state.
In the very beginning of the creation of this prison, I VERY vaguely thought about the implications of having people in your basement. This was my attitude then:
And since, it’s been a little annoying to me everytime I took pictures of those four. Just a little.
But not enough for me to do much of anything about it apart from just let it pass without actually examining what was going down in that basement. Basically, I’VE NEGLECTED THESE GUYS.
So then I finally tried to understand why the whole prison thing was so annoying to me.
And then finally I clicked and went:
What is this crap I’ve been writing?
So much of the prison subject lacked support and sense!
But then this side of me came up;
Me: It’s an unrealistic part of the story people will just have to deal with!
That lasted about half a chapter.
Yeah, I called my own bullsh*t.
And then I tried to figure out a way to fix this ungodly problem I placed on my poor weak shoulders. I cross-examined, checked under and over everything, inside and out for a way to explain this unrealistic subject.
It didn’t go too well.
So instead, I decided to fix just one problem. The clothes! Those perfect clothes they’ve had for over ten years now.
So let’s assume they’ve always been wearing these clothes okay? Pretty please?
(P.s. is it bad for me to actually wish Assaria and Velor happiness? Well in love anyway…they’ve both had some love problems…)